WOW great job!!! i really have to start drawing realistically !!

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i like ur leathery jacket style but the hair dosen't look quite right

over all its a awesome picture but..there are bits you could improve on, like :

where you done the front of the forehead tone to the sides its to straight and square which has made like it very square loosing the look that the forehead is rounded. i would suggest more of a subtle tone change maybe not so straight up makes it look wrong..

the nose looks bit to pointed need to add curved lines to get the natural look of a nose...

the watch front is at a weird angle and the shape is bit off..

i think you should of done bit of the same style you did with the coat on the jeans ...

last thing i think you need to add different tones on the shoe to create the feeling and look of the show rather then its just bit like a shadow...

but on the good sides, i think :

the lips are very very good look very natural and lovely toned..

the hair is quite simplistic but its very affective ..

the coat is also very good all the shadow tones creating the creased affect very well done

over all very good pics keep up the good work and hope this has helped

thanks

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